"I heartily advise reading your words out loud, as you write them, after the first draft, and again after the tenth and twentieth draft.
So the cat can hear as well."
By the tenth or twentieth revision, merely looking at your words will induce a hypnotic sense that everything is exactly as you intended. Reading out loud will lead you to the places where that isn't the case, and allow you to make it so. It helps a lot. Try it.